This is a story about a big bad wolf and a little scared kid
Where is the person trying to escape Mr. Wolf? In a big fat tree
Who is he/she and why are they being chased? Because he know that the wolf was hungry and tried to eat him
What kind of character do you think Mr. Wolf is? Donald trunk with big teeth and black and grey hair
How do you think Mr. Wolf found the person? he could sense him and smell him and nearly taste it
Why is he dressed in a suit? to look like a friend
What is it like inside the tree? Dark,smelly,spider webs
How is the person feeling? Scared,shiver,cold
If you were inside the tree, how would you escape? from the way I came in
I really like all the decribing words you have used to say how the girl felt and what the tree and Mr Wolf looked liked.I think I would throw something out to try and distract him then RUN!!!
ReplyDeleteits a boy hahahaha
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